
Title: UNDONE: A CONTEMPORARY MC ROMANCE
Author: Jax Hart
Series: Creed MC
Publisher: Self Published
Reviewer: JoAnna
Release Date: 3/25/2019
Genre(s): Contemporary Romance, Romantic Suspense
Page Count: 252
Heat Level: 4.5 flames out of 5
Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5
Blurb:
I had to leave her behind. Forget I ever laid eyes on her beautiful face.
I did it to protect her… to shield her from the ugly side of the life I’m in.
The life I chose.
We left things UNDONE.
UNFINISHED.
My love might break her, but it’s what I crave– what I need… absolute submission she’ll accept me as her king. Because I’ve already decided, I’ll take her to be my QUEEN and when I do–nothing will be UNDONE between us… we’ll be UNBREAKABLE.
But first, I need to win her back make her understand she was always in my heart, even when the only choice I had was to walk away.
LUCE…
My heart beats only for him. I waited but he never came. My heart turned to ice and now I’m determined no one will crack it again. But a dangerous man more ruthless than the first pursues me.
They both want me.
Desire me.
I’m lost in the woods but only one of them can take me home.
Review:
I have not read this author before and none of the other books in this series though I was able to follow along just fine and I really enjoyed this book. It is well written and the author did an amazing job with the perfect amount of drama and angst. The push and pull were dragging me deeply. MC books are like kryptonite for me. I love reading about them. These men are such alphas but would do anything for the people they love. Including something that can break your heart as well as his. Here is Luce and Smiths story.
What can I say about Luce? I loved her spunk. She is sassy and classy and everything about her you like. She is a strong woman and I felt like I could feel her love and anger and the betrayal she felt.
Smith is the Prez of the Mc. He would do anything for it as well as the woman he loves. He is an alpha male that feels he needs to rule and oh, did I forget to mention he is a DOM. It isn’t hardcore but elements are there. He makes some alliances or are they already alliances and we just don’t know. I loved all the bad boy macho vibes with the MC’s and with the mob. It isn’t over the top and it was done perfectly.
When Luce comes to visit her best friend Dev she is instantly attracted to Smith. They have this connection that you can feel it. They fall fast and hard. Everything is great until it’s not. With Luce grieving her relationship the friendship she has with Dev kind of gets tossed aside when she needs her friend the most. I hurt for Luce and she didn’t have a lot of support. HSe formed new friendships and she had her old friends when she needed them as well.
The book was good, I loved the premise, the writing, and people. I even liked the little surprise element that I actually didn’t see coming. I wish somethings were different and she really made him work for her forgiveness a bit more. With all of that said I am going back to read the other books. I liked this one and want to see what I was missing by not reading them.
Review Copy of UNDONE: A CONTEMPORARY MC ROMANCE provided by Jax Hart for an honest review.
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